Another face in the crowd
But he caught my eye
Our eyes locked on each other
As he made his way over
With a sincere smile
As he was passing out flyers
He was eager to please
And promote his group
Hearing what I wanted
Buying into the lies
He worked the young girls
To get his name well known
He shook my hand
And asked my name
Chris MC was his
And his friend was Reality
He called me a Princess
I was instantly stuck
Working his charm
For a measly buck
Clever to play
Trapped in the charade
Wearing that smile
Just for the game
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Written June 16th, 2006
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Hey thnx for understanding, and for the advise. I feel better already.
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I Think It's Great
The rhyme and flow very good - the contents of the poem tell a story repeated over and over again in so many areas - I would tweek the poem a bit - and thats what I do with mine - I post them - then I read them and make changes. keep up the good work - Joe - PE -------------------------------------- cheers
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Hey there! Thanks for the awesome comment =) This piece is about a concert I went to. And the guy in the band was working the crowd before the show to get his band more known. So he would flirt with all of the girls trying to get them to form a little mosh pit. It was pretty ridiculous. It helped that he was VERY good looking. lol Thanks again!!!
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Hmmm quite a nice write you have here! the only thing i didn't really like was 'and his friend was Reality'... i think its too many syllables kinda breaks the flow of the poem...
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Thanks a bunch!! I love reading your work as well
The One and Only...
~Lynn Jones <3 -
very good
This is very well written and a very good in how someone call "seel" them seleves to youi in so many ways to know who they really are! well done!!! Also I've added you to my favs. I love reading your work!!!
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