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My savior

When I look into your eyes
I see innocence and beauty
You look at me knowing
I am not perfect
But you love me anyways

When I come to you for help
You know just what to say
I could cry on your shoulder
And you would hold me
While you kiss my tears away

You are someone I can depend on,
You're beautiful in everyway
You have taught me to believe
In myself and in love
You are me savior, and I love you

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Written June 16th, 2006

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  • Haunted-Memory silver member
    June 24, 2006
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    Excellent

    It is always nice to know that we have a loved one there that we can depend upon when we are in need of them to be there for us. Thank you for this delightful poem you have entered into my contest wishing you all the best Brian.


  • chica1
    June 22, 2006
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    beautiful poem i love it!!!!!


  • TorturedLifeandSoul
    June 16, 2006
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    aww thats so sweet. it's beautiful. i love this peom. terrific job!