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Empty Yard

When I arose the hour was late
and sky was partly sunny.
Into the yard I looked so hard
I looked but saw no bunny.

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Written June 16th, 2006

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  • Yusefeligirl
    October 12, 2006
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    HAHAHAA!
    Your weird humour tickles me...


  • Barb Davidson silver member
    August 29, 2006
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    Mmmmm Rabbit Pie,
    On my plate,
    'cos that Inky,
    Got up late.

    Damned things are a nuisance, if they carry on burrowing under my shed it will disappear along with my mower & bike!

    Have you gone down a burrow somewhere too? Or just plain fed up with this place.

    Barb


  • missy mee777
    June 16, 2006
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    But where did the bunny go?


  • leo2
    June 16, 2006
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    Didn't you know? There's bunny thieves in these here parts. We affectionately call 'em moderators. They've been known to split hares on occasion.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • Magic Bullet
    June 16, 2006
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    One of the things I done as a hooligan teen that I'm ashamed of was liberate a girls bunnies from their hutch under the cover of darkness.

    She still doesn't know it was me. It's a burden I have to hare.


  • Xx Alice xX
    June 16, 2006
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    In the wee hours of morn, when the sun is not quite there. Be very, very quite and you just might see a hare.

    This is adorable dear, I love it.

    OOK OOK Baby.

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