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Tears

Don't hide from fears,
Tears do come.
It's my favorite medicine.
They really help,
When they fall.
Sad and lonely?
Give them a call.
They can help through most pain,
Sunny,snowy,or through rain.
They're always ready to ease a heart,
Soul or mind.
Never leave your tears behind.

Author notes

I wrote this poem to tell poeple that it's OK to cry sometimes. They really help me to destress myself and sleep well.

Written June 15th, 2006

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  • joy4seen
    May 8, 2008
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    Aw such truth I say tears cleanse the soul and allow us to breathe freely, nice little write


  • A Summer Depression
    March 27, 2008

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    i like this one cause tears are the best medicin......very calming lol keep writing, this is a gd write


  • CaliOkie silver member
    February 12, 2008

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    Very well done. It is OK to cry sometimes. It will seem to get harder to do as you get older, but it is a good thing to stay in touch with. And yes, even old guys like me cry from time to time.

    CaliOkie


  • RogueShadow
    September 9, 2006
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    outstanding!

    wow. just wow. that's really good. it speaks maturity. it just oozes soul. it sounds like you know what you are talking about. brava!