Come dampen my fury with
kindness,
withdraw all this poison
within,
take no for an answer
the first time, and let the
healing begin;
A smile beckons love from
the shadows, with hand reaching
out tenderly...reject or accept
is the question, will I wilt?...or glow;
To trust in another completely,
takes courage, I sadly do need,
so steadfastly stick to me closely
when torment and fear re-appear;
Then when all emotions can mellow
and calm reigns much stronger .. again,
I'll be there for you when you need me,
as you were for me ...all along.
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Written June 15th, 2006
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Delighted that you enjoyed it
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Lol, yes confusion is my middle name
Many thanks for your comments, they were very much appreciated
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Thank you Delighted that you enjoyed it
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Many thanks for your kindness
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What an incredible picture to open such an incredible piece. Nicely done. I love your words...they are beautiful! Keep up the wonderful works!!
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Awesome!
This has me slightly confused, but I liked this very much! Good contrasts and word usage! Keep penning! Best of luck! -
This is a very goog job in my humble opinion. I love the style and the form that you used. You have a nice way with words.
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i like this poem because it's strong. has a lot of solid contrasts. good job. i think you have great potential and it shines.
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