Remembers when you used to scoop me up with open arms,
Cuddle me,
Hold me?
Remember when you told me you would always be here for me,
Protect me,
Look after me?
What happened?
I've seen you twice in four months,
I could say the dates if you wanted,
Doesn't that prove something?
Prove that I'm desperate,
Desperate not to forget about you,
To not forget about good times with you,
Special times with you.
I might have changed baby,
But I'm still the same vulnerable girl seeking help,
I'm still the girl you met,
Fell in love with.
I'm much more confident now,
Done more with guys,
But that shouldn't change how we are.
I am still the girl you took under your wing,
Looked after.
I am still the girl you took the virginity of,
Stealing my innocence,
Sleeping with me.
I would do it again,
Sleep with you again,
If it meant i got a cuddle...a cuddle when it was over.
Lying there naked next to you wouldn't be an issue,
I just want the cuddle off my baby that Ive been longing for.
You see the cover of me...
The bit people call a slag,
The outgoing,
Confident side,
Not the me you used to see...
The me you fell in love with,
The me who misses spending time with you,
Hugging you,
Cuddling you,
And most of all, misses our friendship.
You don't see this me,
The vulnerable me,
Oblivious to the big wide world...
Not like you used to...
Do you have this hidden,
Sensitive side,
A side that misses me?
Because baby if you do,
Let me see it,
Answer my questions,
And let us be how we were...
Author notes
take a guess who its to x
Written June 15th, 2006
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babyyy i love youuu!!
. thats so sweet even though ur sat near me like right next to me now. its so sweet and i'm jus gna giv u a big hug! (}) xx
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fab poem.!
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oo i get to do yoo, eh
hehe thnks hun, yeah i know yoor only jokin... but ther is others... i wasnt really geti at how i gfeel wen thye do it, just that thats all he sees... yeah true, thanks alot hun love yoo xoxoxoxooxox
ps.. wen do i get to do yoo?
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hey sweetie yeh i can quite easily guess who this is for and i really love the entire poem, you really can feel youre emotions through this which shows just how strong it is. I love u 2 bits hunni and i may call u a slag but i dont think you are at all, im just jokin but i know other people may not be and that can be so hurtful as youve said above. I know you havent seen him as much as hes ermm preoccupied but this has happened before and you normally start talking and seeing each other again after a while of him being absent. if that doesnt happen this time then hes lost a great mate and more.
Love and hugz xxxxxxxx
ps il do you
hehe
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hmmm i cannot possibly think who *sky rolls eyes* good poem and i know the feeling that you can't let someone go. anyway, i dont understand this line:
The bit people call a slag,
but maybe you did a typo or something. fab poem darling, nice write, hope you're ok, l8az love ya always sky xxx -
Why hullo there missus,
Gawd i really have not been on here for years. I will get back into it at some stage, but until then do forgive me. I'm not going to say the guys name because i think we all know who it is ! Really touching piece i can tell that what you found hard to say in person came out more fluent in your poetry. You really have expressed your true intense feelings and this leaves a lasting impression on the audience. Rememeber that just because people change and you might not see them as much as you would want to, doesn't mean they care about you any less. I think the fact that you have expressed your emotions so directly in the piece creates an atmosphere so that you get a real feel of what you were going through.
Awesome write
Julie xXxXxXx
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