Down with happiness!
Drown in tears.
Done with this lie,
lies that have been belived for years.
What lead me to belive them is beyond me,
and they were terriable, unbelivable, wrothless, hallow.
How could I let myself think I was wanted?
Why would anyone see me as "the one"?
Stupid me belived it, all of it,
What was the point of even trying?
I saw it, I saw that it was coming,
and now again, again I have fallen and broken, dying.
What's wrost is no one will help!
but yeah, yeah I even saw that.
Traped,
but wrost than a rat.
Helpless,
with no one to yell for.
Not like that's new,
welcome back, yeah back to the floor.
On the ground,
lost and left all alone,
Dead,
Gone.
People don't see,
what is in plain sight.
But the aren't blind,
it's simple there just isn't any light.
So can you blame them?
Can I yell and scream?
Is there someone out there? Is it just me?
Maybe it is just me, or perhapes a very long, very, very bad dream.....
Author notes
This is the poem was writen because the boy from "True Love".
Written June 15th, 2006
A contest entry
- You break my heart into a thousand pieces and you say it's because I deserve better by Lie 2 Me Once Again.
625 points, ended July 11, 2007, 11 entries
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This is heart breaking, but true!! I can see why you would write this, ive felt it myself, really i have. Hurting so bad you want to just leave it alone. But love is a hard thing to avoid.
'Down with happiness!
Drown in tears.
Done with this lie,
lies that have been belived for years.'
'On the ground,
lost and left all alone,
Dead,
Gone.'
All of it just screams pain and hurt.
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very good
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wow god knows im feeling that right now. hella crappy feeling. damn. i love this one. very good write
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LOVE IT!!
angie i could also feel your pain..i really hope you dont feel like that anymore but its a good poem also very sad and deep its good!!
Love always
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Great poem
Very creative and sad poem. I could feel your pain throughout.
Keep up the wonderful work!
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