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The End

Through the thick,
And through the thin,
You know Im always here,
even in the end.

Maybe it was Lust.
Maybe it was Love.
We'll never know,
We never let it show.

All the laughs,
And all the cries.
The whispers in my ears,
and the tears in your eyes.

You mean so much to me,
I'm not sure how to desribe.
There is no words,
no songs or poems.

Through the thick,
And into the thin.
I was always there,
Where were you in the end?
 

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Written March 20th, 2003

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  • darkgig722
    January 19, 2004
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    aw..how sweet..and i just tooted

  • HayHay
    April 5, 2003
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    This is a great write and it seems that you have had your heart broken which hurts really bad i know and i hope things get better if that is what had happened
    Love Alwayz
    ~*Hayley*~


  • FinallyFound
    April 4, 2003
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    come on, you didn't actually think i would forget about you now did you??? lol well, good job. i like this. great emotion from within. speaking to another asking questions unanswered. i like this. keep up the work.


  • AzulKatze
    March 20, 2003
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    very very VERY touching, with the words you used. i like how sometiems u rhymed it, and sometimes u didnt, its very cool. i think it was intentional, but im not sure lol. nice write, keep it up!
    *~!)o(Azul Corte Katze)o(!~*