I wrote this a while ago ( 01/03/03) but never posted it...sorry.
You meant so much to me,
I never thought you'd be the one to hurt me.
I trusted you to soon,
and in the end,
was left alone,
lookin upon the moon.
I close my eyes,
And take in a breath.
This is it,
this is the end.
I slowly pick up the knife,
and lower it to my wrist.
Then a sound goes off.
I think to myself,
no way..couldnt be...
I set down the knife and walk to the phone.
"hello?" I say, shaking so,
"Hello Beautiful!" I hear you say.
my hands are shaking...
I dont know what to say..
I hang up the phone,
then reach behind and turn it off..
this is the only answer...
the only solution I know how..
I was my momma lil dove,
yet in the end,
I died for love..
Author notes
This was wrote on my dark days...I never told anyone I wrote it but hey...here it is...I no longer feel many of these...yet sometimes... I think no one understands...
Written March 20th, 2003
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this is a really good, extremly sad poem. the last three lines make this a very haunting piece.
,,,=^..^=,,, Clare -
I know what you feel like i have a lot of Dark Days and pretty much everyday I dont think that anybody understands or cares and im pretty sure that they don't but I think that this feeling will hopefully go away atleast a little when we get out of these teenage years that TOTALLY scuk but Ill live through it and im sure you will to and im glad to hear that you dont have to many dark days anymore although I still have them all the time but ill go now
Love Alwayz
~*Hayley*~ -
I know that feeling too well.. This poem has many emotions that can be felt when reading it.. I dont really think Ive been hurt enough to want to kill myself.. But I wont lie.. when I think about HOW many times Ive been hurt by those who mean the most to me.. it does come to mind.. But I was lucky.. Im not suicidal n thank God for that.. Well Ill stop blabbering on
Great writes
MaLz
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