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Who are you?

Who are you?
You world of shifting sand.
Who is it that you follow?
The world, or the Man?
Would you recognize my Jesus?

I want to be like him.
But perhaps I never will.
My names are cheat, liar, thief, but still...
His glory withstands my sins.
I want to be like my King.

We slip. We slide. We trip and fall.
But wait! Just listen!
There's One there with us,
There through it all.
Follow, trust, and recognize at last!

This is the One.
Your shot for his dream
We're both a part of this big scheme.
Be like our Jesus.

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Written June 15th, 2006

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  • Robbi
    April 13, 2007

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    Very insightful. I can tell you speak from the heart. This is something very meaningful in your life