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the little fighter

there's this little solider
who i put my prays out too
his not very well at the moment
and has not got long.
please little solider
i will say tonight as i pry before i go to bed
fight the war that's going on inside you
so your mummy can hold you
and you will be fine
so to this little solider i have two words for you
fight on, never give up and all will be there for you.

Author notes

this poem i have written is dedicated to irenes baby nephew who has an infection on his brain and might not last the night.
Written June 14th, 2006

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  • irene plunkett
    June 15, 2006
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    thanku for showin so much love for my nephew. we all pray for him. u r a lovely poet and u can show ur feelings. ty


  • gullionmar
    June 14, 2006
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    such a heart breaking write ,sorry to hear about her lil soldier i pray that god will perform a miracle in this young childs life and let him live a happy life. god bless your friend and you in her time of pain

  • babygurl1014
    June 14, 2006
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    aww thats really sad i am sooo sorry. i hope he fights like a little soldier. keep up the great poetry. check mine out sometime. love keisha