So many things you left unsaid,
So little time after,
Your thoughts wandered by,
And i'm left to wonder,
When it was i lost you,
Knowing that to you,
I was the only one you wanted to look,
The thought that made you hang on,
But hanging on hurt you,
Your hands were burnt,
This is when I realise too late,
I should have taken the rope for a while,
Let you hold onto me instead,
So you had some reality to grasp,
And I should Have promised,
Things I could never keep,
Because they would have kept you sane then,
So I could put them right now,
And help you get by.
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Written June 14th, 2006
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Wow Amber, this is fantastic. The words work well with each other and it flows brilliantly. It's really sad and really deep but not too hard to understand at the same time.
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amazing
"And I should Have promised,
Things I could never keep,
Because they would have kept you sane then"
GREAT LINES that really tell it as it is! This is a really deep poem, I really like what you've done with it!
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