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Hollow

This is what i've become,
How I make it through each day,
There has to be an empty shell,
So i can't hurt anymore,
I have to be alone,
Because no one can see,
This knife that twists inside of me,
The fire that turns my heart to tinder,
The hurricane that scatters my dreams,
And the cut-throat thread,
That will strangle my tears,
Even cold-hearted fear wont cause it to break,
Shaking despair can't force it to let go,
And none of me can make it unravel,
Because the strengh I had has turned against me,
Forcing me to continue,
When the only way forward,
Is to fall,
And trust anothers arms to catch me.

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Written June 14th, 2006

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  • master-of-shadow
    June 14, 2006
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    great peice, very expressive and well written with a powerful content and good solid structure. the flow and pace are good making it easy to understand while still being indepth enough to hold the reader.