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Imitation

I'm watching the world shattering around,
The fractured pieces fallen to the ground.
The pristine edges tear against my skin
Tearing out the disgrace lying within.

Whore whore whore whore whore whore whore whore whore whore.
They're shouting at me. no stop. always more.
They're carving it in me, blood dripping free
I can't escape them, they won't let me be.

Save me, they're killing me, please, let me live
I'll do anything, give all I can give.
Save me my angel, save me from my hate
Regain my sanity, my conscience sate.

Look at me as I beg you for more.
No longer can all this desire be stored.

Author notes

Oddness...Tis pouring out and I love and hate it...
Written June 14th, 2006

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