You are my Mr. Perfect
Even if you think you are far from it
I would do anything for you
And you would do anything for me too
You make me smile and laugh all of the time
Thinking about how you are only mine
I would never do anything to hurt you
In my past, are things I no longer do
Please make me this promise
And the promise is this
Promise me that you will never leave me forever
And me and you will stay together
If you make this promise to me
Be positive that you mean it because I don't want to be
Sad or lonely again!
Author notes
This was the first poem i had wrote my ex-bf and its about the only one i could come up with to put on here
Written June 14th, 2006
A contest entry
- All about Love by GlamourPuss.
300 points, ended June 19, 2006, 13 entries
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it was a joke. me and my friend were talking about this guy daniel(which i ended up dating) and he walked in and asked what we were talking about, so we just said something off the top of our heads. and then i wrote a poem about him. i couldnt come up with a title until my friend said i should name it that and we both thought it was funny so thats what i called it
thank you for the support! -
This is a sweet poem, i like the flow but i was a bit unsure about the title.
Thankyou for entering.
Cat x
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