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Your Love (Autumn Leaves)

Your love is like autumn leaves
falling all around me
with so many colors.
Surrounding me, causing me to dive
so deep, into the piles of leaves;
falling so deep in love with you.

Your love is yellow, red, orange,
your love is friendly, passionate, caring,
your love is deep, warm, and
all the colors I can imagine.

Your love is like autumn leaves;
one unique scent that I know.
I can tell it apart from anything.
Your love is like autumn leaves,
So deep, so bright,
so beautiful.

You are my autumn leaves.

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Woo... Happy 7 months today babeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Written June 14th, 2006

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  • WonderfulDreamz
    August 29
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    This was a really awesome poem!! : )
    Thankz for the comment on mine.. Keep writing them cause there really great!! 8-)


  • perfectsunset gold member
    June 2, 2007
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    absolutely a beautiful poem sarah, keep it up


  • bloodyknife
    July 5, 2006
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    i love this. its so emotional and sweet. i can feel the love! Very good poem!