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White Hot Angel of Magic

~Uriel,alchemy of the divine light,
  keeper of eco-earth in violet &white.
    With thy Archangelic magik change,
      our deepest loses into salvational gains.
         Bring us sudden universal order~~

This fourth in line holds in his hands,
all the fire of the creator's plan for man.
Brought to earth with heaven's power,
spills forth a cloak of devotion's showers.
Ruler of magik with a fiery sword,
find in his care devotion to our sweet Lord.

                    ~~Suseann~~



Picture credit;"Uriel" by Stephanie Pui-Mun Law)


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Written June 13th, 2006

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  • Sai Babas Lotus
    January 5

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    Dear friend,

    It is great to be back to read this poem! Thanks so much for sharing it. Would you like to write a fresh poem on an angel I pick for you?

    charishma


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    November 13, 2006
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    BEAUTIFUL

    AMEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WONDERFUL BEAUTIFUL PIECE. I LOVED THIS


  • Frozentearz
    June 17, 2006
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    I am truly glad to see this win,
    and it was a joy reading it for the seocond time.
    Love and Light
    Tearz


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 16, 2006
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    Oh dang! She went there! Woot! I was wondering if anyone was going to go for Uriel and capture them with their spiritual essence This is a phenomenal piece! Short and most surely a powerhouse! I love this!


  • suseann
    June 15, 2006
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    Thank you for illuminating his just cause further Charishma.

  • Sai Babas Lotus
    June 15, 2006
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    WOW! Wonderful poem, my friend! Your research on the Archangel Uriel is awesome and an act of good karma which I am sure He is pleased with and has blessed you for. You have spent quite some time writing this, I can tell from the flawless rhymes, wonderful vocabulary, excellent imagery, beautiful metaphors, wonderful alliterations and delightful flow of this poem. The poem flows like a song because you took care of meter too. I enjoy reading poems on angels and Archangels and other divine beings. When I saw the title of this, I knew I had to read it. The affirmation of the Archangel Uriel that I use is: "Divine light shines from within. I am eternally radiant, loving and wise". Uriel is the Regent of the Sun and is the most radiant of the Archangels. He rules over thunder and terror. Sometimes, he is seen with a book at his feet, which is the one he gave to Adam with all the medicinal herbs in it. What I like most about him is that he helps us to decode our inner voice. He is also known as the Flame of God, Angel of the Presence, Angel of Salvation, Prince of Light, Angel of Repentance(thus he being the Angel of Repentance helps us to understand the laws of karma) and Interpreter of Prophecies. I also appreciate him very much because he helps us trust in the Divine Plan and when things are not going our way, he helps us to recognise that whatever is happening is for the highest good and greatest joy.

    Thank you for brightening my morning with this delightful ode to Uriel.

    Goodluck in the contest!
    God bless,
    Charishma


  • Malabu
    June 14, 2006
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    Ahh Susie.....this is wistmatic if that be a word.....yes yes....without doubt...you have touched the essence of this angel of spirituality...You have written a gorgeous piece girl....I would not expect anything less then excellence from you...... for ya...to warm your heart and a slappie clappie to revive me...lol....
    Hugs
    Mally


  • penman gold member
    June 14, 2006
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    excellent

    Very soothing to the senses and soul. A great job! Good luck in the contest.

  • Frozentearz
    June 14, 2006
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    This was simply awesome and the color is so much better and alive within your page. Magical in thought and words.
    Thank you for sharing
    Love and light
    FrozenTearz


  • Puppydog gold member
    June 14, 2006
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    VERY BEAUTIFUL!

    Very beautiful dear friend. Uplifting!

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