Let me be fake just once again,
knowing everyone is watching.
I can't do this happiness,
and pretend that everything is fine,
once again.
Let me smile and bow for you,
to show that I am still here.
You watch as I tumble down,
to the hell were I belong,
once again.
Let me sing my goodbye one last time,
as my insanity kills me within.
Watch as I slowly fall downward,
and close my eyes.
But only this time,
I will not awake,
ever again.
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Written June 13th, 2006
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I think you have a knack at emotional poetry
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Awesome
This definitely spoke to me in a few ways, very intense.
I would change one tiny thing though.
Where it says:
Let me sing my goodbye one last time,
as my insanest kills me within.
Flows a bit better as:
Let me sing my goodbye one last time,
as my insanity kills me within.
Other than that, Well written.
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haha wow this was old. Thanks for that suggestion.
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a very good poem with emotions and powerful meaning
i really dont know why i feel similar
and then you say its not
the words are really similar what i wanted to tell her -
great poem... i love the way you write and it is very hard to express how you feel to others its much easier being fake.... i love it!
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this is a very good poem... dark but good!!! You did agreat job on this!!! Keep up the great work!!!!!!!!
Hugs,
Beth -
you should read my latest one.
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Very well written.Great poem.Don't let people play like that with you though.I loved reading this.I still thought it should have been longer.Keep it up
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wow, hun. this was amazing
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wonderfull
I really liked that poem...because it was very dramatic in a beautiful sense.....lovely!
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