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Winter Wind

Tearing wind
On a Winter's night;
Bitter,
Yet I miss you
In the sweat
Of Summer.

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Written June 13th, 2006

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  • Shakes-spear
    August 20
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    Very nice

    We do miss our loved ones when they are not with us. This is a very nice poem and I was glad I got to read it! Good luck, The Shaker