Hanging hearts on hooks,
baby drain me dry,
suck the passion from my soul,
and leave me worse than dead.
Drain me,
kill me,
break me,
hurt me,
I don't give a damn,
but you'd better fear,
the boogey man.
The one who weaves your dreams,
where you are,
hanging hearts on hooks,
and every time you do you see me cry.
Sorry's never good enough for me,
I'm a fan of sweet revenge.
So, baby, I'm going to drain you dry,
the way you did to me.
Hanging hearts on hooks,
baby drain me dry,
suck the passion from my soul,
and leave me worse than dead
Hanging hearts, we're hanging hearts,
in a sick romantic suicide.
Hang them from a cold dead tree,
so all the world can see,
our true dead, pure love suicide.
Remember those lovely dreams of yours,
where you're hanging hearts on hooks,
and every time you do you see me die.
Hanging hearts, we're hanging hearts,
in a sick romantic suicide.
Hang them from a cold dead tree,
so all the world can see,
our true dead, pure love suicide.
Hanging hearts, we're hanging hearts,
in a sick romantic suicide. {x3}
Author notes
Guilt. Revenge. Desperation. Despair.
Written June 13th, 2006
A contest entry
- For People With Two or less or No Trophies (My 11th Contest!!!) by Trixie08.
300 points, ended December 4, 2006, 52 entries
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i loved it
thanks it was great and worth everything to read 
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Very nice morbid interesting this one will do very well good luck!! -
burr..this is different..I like.. great..thanks for entering..sarah
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww !! this is really really awesome poem !! where do get such lines man ? i am amazed !!
thank you so much for entering and best wishes in the contest ,
your friend , fan and host ,
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Hey, Cant stop reading this. You're a master poet
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Wow, thanks.
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Thank you for your heartfelt entry, good luck, Josie
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Great
Very well written! I especially liked the 2nd stanza--Good luck in the contest!!
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I can read this over and over again, I think because I can relate to it so damn much. Awesome.
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loved it
the repetition was awesome made your point get put across well -
LOVE IT!
I loved this one so much it's filled with so much haterd and it's a wonderful piece I hope this guy gets what he deserves. *evil*
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Frickin Sweet!!!!!!
hey this is intense and lovely an just urking!!!!!!! it leaves me speechless and wanting more. I can visulize it in a black metal band!!!!!! -
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I'll take your word for it...The closest to back metal I come is listening to early Cradle of Filth.
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lol!
either way it was quite stunning
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This would be quite an interesting song
It's lust. xD
Well, I'm not sure. It's like a horror film; a twist of love and hatred feelings towards a past love. And of course, revenge. = )
Anyway...Thanks for the comment on my work and keep it up with your work
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I think it just became an expression of all my bitterness towards everyone who ever hurt me.
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I love it. It reminds me of a vampire I love, well parts do. It's a really good subject and it flows well. Good write. Keep it up.
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