dedicated 2: the ghetto
They look at you strange
They twisting up their face
All cuz yall ain't from the same place
There! is where the seed forms HATE
For your and my color race.
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Written June 8th, 2006
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short and to the point. feel as though you could have written more on this subject? i would like to hear more of the abuse in this piece as i feel too many people suffer at the hands of others and they may find it beneficial to know that they are not alone. just a thought. forgive my typical englishness, but i'm not sure what 'cloor' means? presume its slang? there is great strength in your words, keep writing.
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Well Done!
Yes, it is a shame how we are raised in society to think and act just the way we we're brought up to think, and God forbid your thinking is off..Very well expressed my friend, always a pleasure to read your thoughts you jot!
Pen on hun! 
-Timothy The Poetic Weaver~
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Happy summer
well brother (big hug) i miss you...
haven't wrote in like months babe....i will shoot you something i began but never finished........
please tell me how your're doing..but e-mail on my personal account. krystalcraney@yahoo.com
tell me what's been up with you ..it has been a minute since we last spoke so i expect to hear loads....... can't wait to hear from you
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