You damaged my heart,
just ripped it apart
scattered the beauty in me...
Now that I'm at liberty
to convey to you my tone,
you don't wanna leave me alone.
Call me all night and all day,
blow up my cellular phone.
To you ex-lover
This is what I have to say;
"When you hand me in the palm of your hand
every word I expressed you didn't understand.
All the nice gestures I displayed,
you took them one by one, and then betrayed
my love".
You want to come back into my life?
What'd you think,
I'd let you play me like a fife?
Let you cheat, and con, and lie,
holding me down and making me cry...
Well, my sweet you've had your turn.
This experience truly made me learn,
and because of you, I now have a clue
of what to do, and what not to do too.
So, Mister Know-it-all, I bid you adieu.
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Written June 12th, 2006
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Good job.
You conveyed your feelings and thoughts quite well.
Deep emotions and struggles we've all faced, to give in one last time, or stand tough.
Your character did the right thing!
"So, Mister Know-it-all, I bid you adieu. "
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Love this! Although there is an element of hidden pain...these words carry a sense of unbridled strength. BRAVO! Move on to a higher ground! That is evidently where you belong. Leave the person there, right where you've left them because it must be where they want to be. YEAH for you! Great work!
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