The feel when you touch me
The way you move from side to side
Is so unbearable and warm
Gets me going and then i glide
The way you make love to me
Is so precious and so kind
The way you touch my breasts
Its hard for me to decline
The way you make love to me
It means so much
The way you move your body
I cant help but touch
I like the the way you make love to me
Especially when you gently kiss my neck
And the way you always kiss me
With all those soft gentle pecks
I like the way you make love to me slow
But i like it better when you move it fast
It comes a lot quicker
And for that no one can contrast
I like the way you breath heavily
It lets me know what you like
I like the look on your face when you finish
I then know.... when you hit the strike
I like the way you move your lips
And the way you always got that smile
I like the way you move your hips
You make everything worthwhile
Author notes
Written June 12th, 2006
A contest entry
- Turn me On by danceswsquirrels.
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What did you think
Comments
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excellent
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A passionate poem showing the emotional side of sex when you truly love someone, well done I think you did this very well!
The poem read really well too, all the stanzas had a good rhythm and it made this poem a joy to read.
Good luck in the contest!
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Light and lovely
Your ditty was delightful. It made me chuckle with pleasure!
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Nice, It is always nice to tell a man the way you like it. Well done
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this was very subtle. a great write. thank you for entering and best of luck to you!
~bee
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That was very pretty.. and a lovely testiment to true love...
J~~~ -
Mmmmmmmmm...nice and hot! Good work and your words perfectly descibe the passion. "I like it better when you move fast" WOW...that caught my attenion! You manage to have a HOT write while keeping it very tasteful. "Tasteful"...well you can take that comment in two different ways if you know what I mean. Thanks for sharing this and good luck in the contest!
~lol~ David -
This is a very sexy write. Nice visuals and descriptions. Good explanations of what you enjoy from your man. Thanks for sharing.
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Bloody Well Done!!
Beautiful!!! So passionate, sensual and so sweet!! This poem bursts with emotion, and displays that you have a real talent!! -
good poem i really felt it
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