Angry Rainbow Butt Monkey
You sensor me like I'm on your TV
I say what's on my disturbed mind
I talk about shit you'll never ever see
Don't you tell me that I'm your kind
You won't, never will and can't be me
When you look inside, it's not for free
You fuckin freak, take it from behind
You're act like your fucking three
What the hell didya think you'd find
Innocence, freedom, the right to bear a gun
your horrified by the things I've done
Fuck you actin like an illegitimate son
By the time you read this I'll be gone
Your disposable punk, I'll do it for fun
Quick on the draw call me Billy the Kid
My brains screwed up from all that Cid
Don't ask me who or what the fuck I did
Secrets so unthinkable they ran and hid
Violent by nature it's a beautiful sight
Try that again and I'll set you right
You know what? You were probably right
I gotta get off this downward flight
My natural reaction is to stand and fight
Go cut yourself or else I just might
Everything you hide will come to light
You call me out??Just around midnight?
What's gonna happen when I take the bait?
Where will you end up at this rate
Please grow up you're making me irrate
Stop talking bullshit about my fate
My place is secure in the hall of fame
Yeah, I'm for real this is not a game
Billy the Kid I said,remember the name
The excuses you offer are fuckin lame
I don't think you'll ever be the same
The mention of my name you went and came
Takin you out that's my claim to fame
I won't lie down and I won't take the blame
I'll say it again, you'll never be the same
Wait a minute, you'd better shut the fuck up
Half empty? I'll show you the full cup
So remember, what goes around comes around
Don't you fuckin tell me to calm down
I'll be the one smiling in the end
You'll end up jumpin off the deepend
What was in that letter you didn't send?
You told me I was your best fuckin friend
Talkin to you is like hittin a brick wall.
I hope I didn't make you feel too small.
-Billy the Kid-
Author notes
BillytheKid
A contest entry
- A Hint of Inspiration by Fixing Tomorrow.
870 points, ended January 29, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BackStabber! by GypsyEyes.
575 points, ended April 18, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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wow now i totally get your name! i mean i've read your poems before and i never really got your name until now! great poem! good rhyme! thank you so much for entering my contest and i wish you the best of luck! NineTailedFox
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There are a few gramatical errors, but I totally loved this! i love how the background is happy, parts of it sound pessimistic, but other parts sound optimistic. I'm not usually a fan of cure words in poetry, but this fit, not matter how many times you used the F word! Haha. Thank you!
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Damn...that's some very intense stuff. EXCELLENT!
Great title, too, by the way...
.:All The Best :.
Andro
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That was the intent. It was inspired by one of my favourite rappers.You've probably never heard of him, his name is Mad Child.He's from SWOLLEN MEMBERS.
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you HAVE to make this into a rap song. its amazing. great job
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This is good! Very strong and vivid emotion... Well done
Thankyou for entering and good luck...
Take care...
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I felt every emotion in this. Vivid, abstract and yet everything comes together. I truly feel the depth from this. So much truth. I loved every line of this piece as its' very touching and just full of positive thoughts and energy. Stunning imagery and the flow to this piece is quite impressive. Lovely write!! Great message in this poem. Thought provoking, Imaginative, and I loved your creative imagery. Your carefully chosen words painted a picture as I read your poetic work of art. I am glad I read it. thanks for sharing. Keep up the great work. Best of wishes to you. good luck in all that you do....peace always in all ways.
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this seems more like a rap for a battle than a poem although it was a very good jump like it well done j
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Good rant.. the title was funny.
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Wow this is a very intense poem full of anger. I hope your going to be alright man seriously. This a very wild poem very scary too.
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Great poem
Wow made me think, good write. rhyme was very good throughout poem. great job.
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