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Unrhyming emotion

what makes me happy is when my mind goes blank
when all thoughts are gone because i know all my thoughts are of HER.
those thoughts that make me sleepless like Seattle, beaten like Rocky, and stranded like castaway

it's three in the morning and i'm still up. you guessed it,
thinking of HER. realizing that she has the same initials as my favorite band, DMB.
realizing that while there are some things i don't like, there are many  more things i do and the things i do would, like Rocky, beat the things i don't.
but it's not that simple. because with just a few words you suddenly lose the other half of your life.

having a bad day and not being able to know that there is that one   person out there still believing in you and believing that you are..Superman. believing that she is Wonderwoman is no hard task. its second nature.
the ability to leap tall buildings in a single bound..nothing compared to the ability to kiss the lips of the one person that can make you the incredible Hulk.

it has been said that "he who makes a beast out of himself, rids him of the pain of being a man"...

well i say let those people be beasts, for beasts cannot love like man can, beasts cannot feel what man can, beasts cannot care like man can, beasts cannot understand that simple touch of hands under the table makes the whole night explode like..pearl harbor.

so will i have the happy ending? the "two weeks notice", the "jerry maguire" , the "beauty and the beast" ? or will i have the bitter ending? the "walk to remember" ?

i guess it's up to the Director.

Author notes

this makes me feel alone

unrhyming piece of emotion here...with alot of movies sewn into the bedding...hope u enjoy
Written June 12th, 2006

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  • TheDrip
    June 15, 2006
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    Ah, I had tried to comment this and it screwed up. Anyways, I dig the movie allusions here, it added to the feeling of it overall Thank you for entering and good luck!

  • Mooku
    June 12, 2006
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    I like the references to the modern world. Gave it a nice twist. I really enjoyed it. I don't usually read things like this. !!