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Do I let my heart win?

Do I let my heart get broken
once again
by the same undying love I've
had for years
Do I open up the part
that has shielded my heart
and risk the self destruction
and the tears

He has walked into my life
a second time
For years now I've been doing fine
he has always been the pain
do I want it all again
If I let him back into
this world of mine

I know better after all these
years apart
but you try telling that
to this destructive heart
When I walked the other way
for it was better not to stay
it was like the poison tip of
poison dart

But I just can't find the guts
to let him be
For the Internet makes contact
so easy
I feel such a thrill
and his words all linger still
for the one I used to call
my sweet baby

So tell me friends out there
in puter land
This meeting with my man
was never planned
but we have met again
do I go through all the pain
is it safe because
he's in another land

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Written June 12th, 2006

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  • eternalpoet
    August 15, 2006
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    4 Stars ****

    Hi again mummah .. well this is a very sensible poem here, but as far as my experience and my observation matters, i think, long distance relationships dont really last long.... i wont blame that the other person is not trustworthy or anything like that, all i think is, its just too difficult, and ppl usually dont prefer difficult relationships...

    as far as you are concern, you are mature enough to decide for yourself .. wont get too much into your personal life...

    but i hope things are not bad.. wishyou all the best mommy

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.. just keep it up.. your humble little friend.. .. .. .. - vic ( who else? )


  • Scripts
    June 12, 2006
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    Depends on why he left in the first place.This is a great write. Hope you get your answer.
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