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To Whom It May Concern

Until you crash,
Until you burn,
Ill write you this letter.
To Whom It May Concern:

Something scribbled here,
His name plus hers.
The least you couldve done
Was write Sincerely yours.

This 48-minute mixtape, and all my heart will spill.
Your anticipations dying, so I sincerely will.
As you play these songs laced with my paper dreams,
All that I am will rip apart at the seams.

Until I choke,
Until I die,
Ill sit here and smile;
Just a big, fucking lie.

This 48-minute mixtape, and all my heart will spill.
Your anticipations dying, so I sincerely will.
As you play these songs laced with my paper dreams,
All that I am will rip apart at the seams.

This 48-minute mixtape, and all my heart will spill.
Your anticipations dying, so I sincerely will.
As you play these songs laced with my paper dreams,
All that I am will rip apart at the seams.

The least you couldve done
Was write Sincerely yours.
Im writing you this letter.
To Whom It May Concern:

This is where your scars unfold.
So, here and now, set them free;
Let the truth be told.

This 48-minute mixtape, and all my heart will spill.
Your anticipations dying, so I sincerely will.
As you play these songs laced with my paper dreams,
All that I am will rip apart at the seams.

This 48-minute mixtape, just let all your heart spill.
My anticipations dead, the pain sincerely kills.
You played the songs laced with my paper dreams,
And all that Ive become ripped apart at the seams.

Im writing you this letter.
To Whom It May Concern.

Author notes

Not sure WTF this is..
Written June 11th, 2006

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  • FedUpWitU80
    June 12, 2006
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    How does this suck? This is an awesome thing you've written, since you haven't written in forever! oh did I forget to tell you I LOVE YOU, and I'm SOOO HAPPY your back!
    me

  • BreakingxThexHabit
    June 12, 2006
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    Ok Amy this did not suck whatsoever! I loved this. The phrases and words were beautiful! Keep up the awesome writing hun!

    Isabel

  • karabi
    June 11, 2006
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    A good piece, enjoyed it very much.

  • DieNasty
    June 11, 2006
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    I enjoyed it

    It was definately odd to me. But I really liked the way it was formatted as a letter to whome it may concern. It seemed a little disjointed to me, maybee just because it was lyrics to no music. As a poem however, this doen't in any way suck, I liked it, and ejoyed reading it, if that meens anything.