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An Iris For Her Faceless Romance

A settling of lovely sets upon her

She's overwhelmed, She's taken over

All her tears she cries were happily sorrowed

For he is never the moment she feels used or borrowed  

He's the air she breathes

Her everything she always sees

He is her star of life in the moonlit sky

The flights of her fancies are her cradling lullabies

His songs that whisper, kiss her softly and so passionately

That cure all of her illnesses when she's become romantically sickly

His crimson blanket of assurance tremblingly flourishes her skin

While all her daydreams of happily ever after begin with him

A promise that to every rose she is the most beautiful

His Garden to Her is the most lovely of all roses of plentiful

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Written June 11th, 2006

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  • April Renee
    October 19, 2006
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    good job with this. sweet read.

    blu


  • Empathy-eyes
    October 6, 2006
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    This is a beautifully touching write It's funny how dependant we humans are on love. You expressed this well


  • absoluteharmony
    August 8, 2006
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    Hey, I did PM you, but I have no idea if that really works or not. I know you haven't been on here in a long while, but if you do ever log on, I just wanted to say hi.


  • Pretty Escape
    June 12, 2006
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    Aww.. This is really sweet, Tami.
    I hope you're doing good. I haven't talked to you in forever. I'm guessing from this poem that you and Dub are doing good, I hope everything is going okay.
    Love ya, Sierra.