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Regrets

I FF_ID_0 bare to see you cry my love

nor watch your heartache

Your gentle spirit once strong

Now fragile as a new born babe

Helpless and dependant on love

Good-bye my love search on

Look for your prince in shining armour

That slayer of dragons

I FF_ID_1 gentle soul a thing of great beauty

FF_ID_2 as the wings of a butterfly

and crushed the love within

Selfishly taking without giving

Leaving your heart scarred and broken.


Author notes

One of the first love poems i attempted
not sure if it really works.
all opinions welcome.
Written June 11th, 2006

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