as I'm getting older it's getting harder to see,
the scars and proof of what you did to me.
I wrote you a letter today,
"your apart of my past not my future" is what it had to say.
When we met i had no clue,
that as abusive days go by and i dunno why I'm still loving you.
I don't think i can let you go,
but i cant believe how you hurt me so.
I thought you'd be the one that would never say goodbye,
but day after day you hurt me and made me cry.
With your love i got a hurtful tear,
And with that came hurtful fears.
But i was to stupid to believe, that you in return could be loving me
Author notes
again with the abusive boyfriends. i donht like this poem very much. it was just a quicky.
Written June 11th, 2006
A contest entry
- hit me with your best shot by a gothic romance.
474 points, ended July 31, 2006, 46 entries
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flippin cool
very good i actually can relate excatly yess this poem is amazing -
Oh god I can relate...
My ex was very abusive... took me 2 years to leave, and then he found me out broke in a raped me resulting in a pregnancy and the birth of my son... and yet sometimes I still miss him... a part of me still loves him, even though I know that is stupid.
this peice is very well written, you expresed yourself very well with much clarity -
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A truly wonderfully written work. Great job! -
great write! [even if it was just a "quicky"] love the ending.
keep up the fantastic work!
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this is a very well written peice, the content is very well presented with a good flow and power. strange how a person can still love and care for their abuser... I know what you mean though... out of the 3 abusive people I've known I can honestly say only 1 of them I hate, and I think I even care for him on some level... anyway, wel written peice
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wow... this is great and emotional... i really think you did a great job.
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wow that was really good. i know what you mean . even though they hurt us so bad we still some way some how love them . my ex was like that and there are times when i still wish that we could be together and raise our son together. but then i know that he will never change. sometimes we are the stronger one and we have to say good bye no matter how much we want to stay. very good job keep it up ok .
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Beautiful
Its really beautiful, you've portrayed your emotions very powerfully and strongly.I liked.Keep your thoughts flowing.
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or women abusing women or men abusing men, or transexuals... you get the idea...lol i like it.
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wonderful write, im really sorry to hear about your boyfriend.
it makes me sad that there are guys out there like this hurting other women.
and also women abusing men.
sad,
thank you for entering the contest and good luck!
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