unrealistic thoughts,
wrote down and left unread.
words that will tell them,
everything she left unsaid.
dreams run through her head,
all just out of reach.
she learned the lesson on her own,
that noone took time to teach.
abused and unwanted,
she walks through this life alone.
she can make it all by herself,
she'll do it on her own.
she carries the burden by herself,
a secret that nobody knows.
but the path that she takes,
is exactly what you chose.
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Written June 11th, 2006
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wow that was truly amazin indeed i loved evry word it flowed it keep me in all the way it made me feel it made me understand and thats how u know its written from the heart when peeps understand how u feel secrets are a burden but if ur trusted witht them think of it as a thanks cuz people have to trust u all the way to tell u there secrets so dont see it as a burden but as a gift to know what no one knows cuz only u where told but if that secret can hurt people then u better tell some one poem was awesome
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This is interesting. I think the first two stanzas were my favorite part of the poem, maybe because I can relate to them. Anyway this is simple but says much.
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This is a very well written piece with nicely done unforced rhyme and good meter. Nice job on this. Take care and Have fun.
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Great write, we all have secrets and sometimes it seems like to much...welll all the time for me love ya girl
Crystal
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