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The trembling castle

My name is Ego

When you love me
I am happy

When you hate me
I am sorry

When you meet me
I am happy

When you leave me
I am sorry

When you praise me
I am happy

When you scorn me
I am sorry

Janaka says:
Is it true?

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Written June 11th, 2006

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  • jean-marc
    June 13, 2006
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    thank you very much, dr vinze, and certainly you also if you recognize it!

  • drhemantvinze
    June 13, 2006
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    Dear Dr. Jean Marc
    It seems both of you are bestowed with "Heavenly Bliss'
    Dr.Hemant Vinze