Volcanoes, How I hate them and their silicon dust.
I mean, they were pretty cool, but I do not like them any more.
Why do I dislike them?
Is it their color, or shape?
No, I hate them for a worse reason.
I got a disease from them, and I can barely say it!!!
Microelectronics's is what they call it.
You say it, I dare you!!!
It isn't very easy, when you think about it.
And, since it being a lung disease,
I WON'T HAVE A LONG TIME TO SAY IT ANYWAY!!
It messes up your lungs, coats them with something, I think.
Now I am here to warn you.
DO NOT GO AND SNIFF A VOLCANO!!
You may end up with my fate...
and believe me, you don't want it.
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Written June 11th, 2006
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Just wondering how things are with you - hope to see more of your new poetry up here soon - this one sounds so terrible, such an awful disease to have - trouble with breathing - you have written about this very well. Hope all is okay with you.
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this was pretty good. I liked reading it a lot and hopefully I can get some time to read more.
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WONDERFUL POEM
This was great for the contest. Your imagery was great too. It was a pleasure to read this morninbg. Keep writing. I hope all is welol with you and life is being kind to you. Take care, Sandy
Take casre, Gramma. 
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wow...this is honestly a sad poem. Probably the saddest i've ever read. Now I see it's for a conest about "lies"...so I hope this is a lie, lol. If not, damn. This is sad. Good luck with your contest.
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thanks buddy
ranjani
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nice, you have a way with weaving words the form a blacket of flow and something else i forget the word, lol, way to ruin a quote, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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