This time I swear shall be the last
I divine my future from the past
All the mistakes I have made
When I leave, these feelings shall fade
A daemon raging in my dreams
I think I know now just what that means
Out of the darkness, his claim to fame
A devilish boy with an angel's name
A terrible rage hidden in my eyes
And only he saw past that disguise
Of controlling emotions, I once was a master
Now on a downward spiral, I'm falling faster
Tall and strong I had tried to stand
I would have made it had he held my hand
Now I've fallen as it is my turn
So please remember all that I had learned
Look over my grave in shame
I've removed myself from all the pain
So place upon me all the blame
And tell the others that I died in vain
Author notes
Written June 11th, 2006
A contest entry
- Dark poetry by Faerie.Princess.
450 points, ended June 17, 2006, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - DARKNESS (The Anti-Valentine) by Sally the Ragdoll.
525 points, ended February 23, 2007, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice poem!
Keep up the good work, and good luck in my contest!
-Sally -
wow this poem has powerful words. i like how it was set out and the emotion in ur poem. good luck and keep writin
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This is powerful! I think each line strikes the chisel into the tombstone. Those boys ~shakes head~ lol they will always be someone’s undoing. Kidding. But I did love the poem. I agree with both shattered-dreams-xx & Atheist Poet, wording is well used, a very picturesque visual. Thumbs up!
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excellent
excellent poem well writing and I like the language you used. Good job
keep writing
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Why thank you so very much!!
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wow this is incredible.. i love the rhyme.. its wonderful and i love your story... great write!!
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