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perfection

In your name I speak
These words are sacred
Treasure the time
Moments
I wish
to keep

I've gone weak

Sacred melody lies in this
Passion intensifies in your kiss
My dear, I'm
                far gone in oblivion
Happier    than I've ever been

Absolution lies in rest
   Relieve the past
     It lives in all I've expressed
My preference is quite clear

Fondness and affection
In each and every breath
You are my world, my love
You
are
                perfection

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Written June 10th, 2006

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  • sarah nyc
    June 19, 2006
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    Thank you :-)


  • JazzALTernative silver member
    June 12, 2006
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    This works because it is clear and consistent - perfection in letting go, because you can