Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
Bees make honey.
Honey is sweet.
So are you.
Sleep with me.
Author notes
This is a poem I submitted for a poetry challenge for the world's worst poem.
Written June 10th, 2006
A contest entry
- Over 250 Poems by zhaniswolf.
350 points, ended July 23, 2007, 42 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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okay that is bad. very bad in more than one way. if a guy wrote me that or said that to me, i would kill him.
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hmm,...fits well in that contest..l0l (not trying to be mean.)
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i wonder if you won the contest. i'm not saying that this is the worse poem.. but it could have been to the judges. great job trying to make the worse poem ever.
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lol, such a simple poem and straight to the point using a very over used catch phrase. It's a very neat and spirit lifting poem. Thanks for sharing.
- Ryan
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I loved this you are so amazing with these love poems, but I really wouldn't call that love. Sounds like a pick-up lline a guy used on me before: Once upon a time there was a girl named Ashley and she met a guy at a bar and she wanted him so bad, they went to her house and broke her bed springs. LOL. I told him that I didn't have springs in my bed. And we laughed our asses off. Now that I think about it that pick-up line really doesn't resemble what he said to me after all, but it still reminded me of that time. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. Oh and Jeannie D is right that is lust. You lustful devil you!!!! LOL.
Love the one and only never phony,
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wow, i loved this poem. it is humerous but also can be considered a jab to our society. the way men will do anything just to get a girl in bed and then move on. i don't know if that was what you intended but that's what i got. i love the poem though!
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sweet and to the point
lust or love to be judged by the people involved
goood poem
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That is lust not love lol.
You met the challenge!!
Great job. It is cute.
Thank you for sharing.
Jeannie D Hunter
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It was amusing, actually. It its triteness. (I am usually not one to be amused by silly oversexual poetry written by girls without a lot of intellectual imput ~ only sexual imput.)
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Hehehehehehehehehehe that made me laugh, don't know why, very errrr interesting and forward. Liked it though, very cheesy! Keep up the short poems! lol x
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Great Poem
Cute poem and really straight to the point huh? I loved your honesty in the poem. great write
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