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Imitation In Slow Motion

“Honey-pot holes in a
sycamore tree and gum drops on
minted leaves, that worship the
graceful gold that smiles upon life.”

Sugar coated
stretches of the
truth – imagination.
Conventional structures
In rhythmic letters
Are implied as beautiful and
Significant, more so than
In short sighted vision.

“Delighted sensations of
melt in the mouth creamy
textures, and the fragrance of
summer in a hand held bunch.”

Those sensuous gifts are
offered in a sincere gesture
of affection – although not as
aromatic nor extravagant as
depiction perceives it.
The connecting emotion may be
Equal or greater than the wordiness
Of penned thoughts, yet the reality
Is bland, cliché and overlooked.

Portrayal of what the poetic
Mind, and eyes feel, is something
that can only be revealed as
an imitation in slow motion.

Author notes

More of a prolonged and gibberish thought than a poem, but thanks for reading.
Written June 10th, 2006

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  • Dark Hands Listener
    June 11, 2006
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    good write

    It was a good write, but there is just one thing that I couldn't get. It was the scheme you used for the flow of the poem. I read this several times to hopefully try and find out the scheme and I just couldn't. Other than that.... I liked the poem very much.