On a moonless night I died
Life slipped from my eyes in tears
It was your Face! I saw it in the mirror,
Clouded by my breath,
Shallow, crimson Breath!
As I lay prostrate on the ground in a grim salute to death.
Beauty,
Solace
Clutched close to burning heart!
Thorn
Pierces
Clutched close to fading heart!
On a moonless night you cried,
Whispering of forever. Promise
Nothing you can't keep! O, I'm remiss,
I promised you a rose,
Here, one final rose
To whither in the burning sun as you will in my fading prose
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Written June 10th, 2006
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love it.
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Thank you muchly.
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you deffently poored your heart out in this one. i like how you worded this. good job.
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Merci.
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Wow. So much emotion and it's so powerful. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Good luck!
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nice the pain is very clear.i love it.
gina
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