Here today
Gone tomorrow
A fleeting glimpse
But for you it stays
This feeling of immeasurable
Ecstasy
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Written June 9th, 2006
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Well that's sad, it speaks of unrequited love and how it has meaning for one but not for the other. It's quite well written.
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I actually just figured this one out. I know what you meant behind this entire poem. Its so clear....
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And the crowd goes WILD!!!!
Ok, I went back and reread this one, and now that I think about it, I know exactly what you meant by this. Its how you didn't like dan anymore, but there was still this "feeling" inside you for someone close, that someone could probably be.......me. As if you came to realize that even when you were with him, you still felt for me,and knew that the two you were never meant to be, and you held on to that feeling. I am just so homesick without you. The more I thik about it the more it kills me. Argh!. all well, we'll see eachother soon, I'm holding on to that, trust me. -
a crush may linger for a while. but it always fades away with time. unless that crush becomes a spouse, boyfriend, or signifiant other.
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I understand the adjectives, but i don't understand the crush part.
Is it the feeling that passes by then returns? Like a glimpse in a dream that would not be so? But when she recognizes his face in the dream its as if shes heald on to that memory? and she is overjoyed with that feeling.
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