So dark is my life...
But at times the light can blind...
Keeping frozen in fear...
Author notes
Written June 9th, 2006
A contest entry
- Quickie...Three lines...Sharp by Luna Tique Fringe.
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Best of Luck!
Great write...
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second line..a lot of truth there
quirky last line
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This was very emotional.
What you may want to consider is to expand this. I really enjoyed it, so much that the last line made me want more. This is a good thing!
Nice Work Poet
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Thank you very much for the kind words...it really means a lot to me...
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inspiring
go inside or else
will run out
all you have in you -
good write... insightful reflections... good imagery
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awesome
interesting . the darknessis blinding . it can show you what you want to see. but the light holds the truth . and some truth we wish we cannot see. but we want to be able to hide some things from ourselves and only see the truth when we want to . so life itself is still confusing . -
you need to get some expensive sunglasses, that way it will shade your eyes and you will be able to clearly see the light switch - spill ink and twist me into the shape of love...
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