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The awakening

Held back by my past
dwelt within my hopeless dreams
 shunned from God's presence.....

  Now I arise with courage
and move on, with His guidance.

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Written June 9th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • Forms of Me
    June 23, 2006
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    This is a very moving poem..is it a tanka? I think it fits the guidelines for one if not.... I really enjoyed this because of the meaning and message you have shared here.

    I have alot of things in my past which haunt me to this day..but through God's love and grace I am leaving them behind and seeking His powerful guidence...and I am making great stride in my progression.

    God bless you for sharing your strong faith...we need to have others amidst us for encouragement.

    LIZ


  • crisofcross
    June 17, 2006
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    Thank you very much. God bless you always!
    Cris


  • HeavenonEarth
    June 17, 2006
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    Haiku's are quite perfect for this. Brevity brings the expressions out precise. Thank you so much for your qualifying entry and all the best to you in it hon
    Love, Life and Light~
    ~Joy

  • crisofcross
    June 10, 2006
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    Thanks!

  • Eulb kcalB
    June 10, 2006
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    LOVE THIS!!

  • crisofcross
    June 10, 2006
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    thank you very much.


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    June 9, 2006
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    Simple, clear, concise and direct. This shows the transformation you experienced from the past to present, from ignorance and darkness to realisation and light. May there be more power to you in all you do.

    All the best,
    Charishma

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