Nails in my flesh
Teeth in my neck
Fingers in my pussy
The wounds will never heal back
Pin me down
Tie me up
Pull my hair
Make it rough
Cut me deep
Make me bleed
Let the blood flow
As I scream
Want it rough
Want it to hurt
Make me sore
Make me beg for more
Body goes numb
Face goes red
My pussy is wet
But there is more to be said
Hands slip free
Still in the mood
Can’t get enough
Must have more
Flip you over
Claw your back
Make you bleed
Hear you scream
Pin you down
Tie you up
Pull your hair
make it rough
Nails in your flesh
Teeth in your neck
Fingers in your pussy
your wounds will never heal back
Fuck you hard
I won’t give up
Make it last all night
I’ll make it rough
Fuck you so hard
You loose your sight
You beg me please
To tie you up tight
I’ll cut you deep
Make you bleed
Let the blood flow
As you scream
Make it rough
Make it hurt
Make you sore
Make you beg for more
Body goes numb
Face goes red
Your pussy so wet
Just ask for more.
Author notes
i was just really horny
Written June 8th, 2006
A contest entry
- Fandom Erotica Contest by Master Warious.
300 points, ended October 15, 2006, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - What BDSM Means to M/me by Tattboy.
800 points, ended February 16, 2007, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - do you spank dollies? by PorcelainDollies.
300 points, ended March 10, 2007, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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hehe, I REALLY liked this... very stimulating piece here
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Congratulations
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Individual paragraphs/stanzaas/etc are good, but it's a little repetitive for me. I'd also like to see a bigger variety of imagery.
That said, good write, good sex.
=> Jess -
that was really good, although id be a bit scared to have sex with you...sadomasacist. hard beat to match the hard fucking, this poem is nice and disturbing as well as being a very interesting read.
xporcelaindolliesx -
Just a little bit horny? LOL
I really enjoyed the pounding rythmn of this piece.
Thank you for entering My contest.
Tattboy -
horny is what you have made many with this fine bit of erotica. I look forward to more
the Satyr
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Can Tell
Damn you really got your point across on this one I loved it! I thought it was just so good. Very erotic and dark at the same time and I really enjoyed reading your piece and I want to thank you for sharing this piece with all of us.
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catchy! i was humming along as i read it, heh and painting something in my head haha. superbly written, and the flow is just something else. thats the most outstanding part of this poem, its really remarkable. i hope you win the contest! goodah luckah.
~~~ektor
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