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punctus contra punctum

let's write our name in the cement
when the hard hats call it a night.
find a stick or some re-bar
somethin strong enough
to get in the concrete as it dries
and leave our cartouche
engraved in stone
out eternal names
on Jefferson and LaBrea.

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Written June 9th, 2006

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