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A Friendship That Will Never End

On your day just want to say
That you can count on me
to be your friend until the end
Just wait and you will see
I know that you would be as true
to me for just as long
No "if" or "but", no matter what
Our friendship will be strong

So, my dear, I'm glad you're here
To share my joy and pain
I care so much, so keep in touch--
I'll talk to you again!
As you sit in silence,
Wondering why
I'll be your shoulder to cry on
Until your tears run dry

When you've been hurt,
And can't believe what they've done,
If you need someone to talk to
I'll be the one

If a close friend hurts you,
and you don't understand
remember I'm here
I'll lend a helping hand

Burdens are lighter when carried by two
And I just want you to know
I'm her for you
No one really knows
What kind of bond we share
and even if I told them
they probably wouldn't care

You are very dear to me
I hope you know it's true
And now that it's your birthday,
Tell me what I should do

And now I make this vow to you
To keep until the end
I'll help you through the pain and tears
Until our rivers bend
So if you ever need someone
You know just who to call
I'll be here by the phone
And I'll catch you if you fall
I never thought that I would find
A friend so great and so kind
I look up to you in every way
'cause I learn something from you everyday

Withiout you I don't know where I'd be
but you're still here, friends with me
you deserve so much more than I can give
but without you I wouldn't live

You've given me more than money can buy
and for you I'd give my all and I would die
This feeling I fell gets stonger everyday
hoping not to screw it up, I constantly pray

I know we have our problems every now and then
but once its fixed our friendship is better times ten
and I want you to know that I truly do care
even in fights when I say things that aren't fair

You're an angel from God up above
and I'm thankful for your understanding love
because when you're around everything seems right
and for you, until the end, I will fight

It doesn't matter what you do or say
because you'll be my friend anyway
I know the real you, that's down deep inside
and in you, I'll always confide

Thanks for being the friend you are
you're my best friend, and angel by far
everything in you is an inspiration to do great
and you'll be loved by all cause that's you fate!

So never stop being the real and wonderful you
cause God shines through in all that you do
and whenever it seems like I'm never there
remember this: i love you and I'll always care!

You turned my darkness into light,
You made everything all right
You picked me up when I was down
You turned my life around
If I didn't have you, what would I be?
A blessing is what you are to me

When I needed you the most, you were there
even if it seemed like you didn't care
When I didn't think I could make it another day
You chased all my doubts away
If I didn't have you, what would I be?
An angel is what you are to me

Lost and alone, I will no longer be
because you are here with me
There is no reason to be sad
You've taken away all the bad
If I didn't have you, what woud I be?
A best friend is what you are to me!!

Author notes

My best friend wrote this poem for me for my birthday. It meant alot to me. I just thought I'd share it.
Written March 18th, 2003

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  • asian-tequila
    March 13, 2004
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    10/10

    I love this! The true definition of friendship. It's how I feel about my friends. Good job!

    -thekla


  • finding myself 84
    January 14, 2004
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    This was very sweet of your friend to sit down and write a poem with you for your birthday! This is a very touching poem and I have to say hold on to this person because it's hard to find friends like that. Well penned. *sonya*


  • Crayzypoet
    July 21, 2003
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    Do Not Touch iT!

    *AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW* What a happy happy poem..and wow..it made me realize how greatful I am to have MY best friend here by my side through thick and thin..I tried finding my favourite lines..I couldn't..cuz I like em all...their soo beautiful..and you did an AMAZING job..I mean seriously..at ur age..writing like that! You have TALENT..and I don't just mean TALENT u have a LOTTTA talent hehe..and just don't ever stop writing..you're truly an amazing gurl..*keep up the good work* n thanx so much for sharing!

  • --Blue--
    June 27, 2003
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    This is great...I have a friendship just like this one. It's always awesome to know when you have great friends. Be thankful! I know I am. =O)


  • Conni
    June 19, 2003
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    I really like this poem! It's really good. Well, just thought I would say that. You don't know me but ya.
    Love,
    Conni


  • May 4, 2003
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    4 out of 5 stars

    I would love to have you as a friend, to be sure. Presently I only have a handful like the way you describe in this piece. Magnificent work and very true! rosewishes for endymion


  • Mollz
    April 7, 2003
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    first off happy birthday!!!! second, wow, i need a friend like that who would always be there...this is great!!!!


  • March 29, 2003
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    THIS IS AWESOME!!! I LOVE it!! Happy early/late b-day!! now Im off to read some more of your poetry... GrEaT jOb!!

  • Val is a loser
    March 26, 2003
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    Your friend did do an AWESOME job on this!!! I LIKE IT ALOT!!! You should feel special..special dez...haha, i am still carzy!! Well tell the girl i said GOOD JOB, and thanks for sharing it!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Val


  • Monkei gold member
    March 25, 2003
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    Awwwww... Dez thats so sweet!!! I think it's a little lengthy, but still very good! I hope you realize how lucky you are to have a friend so wonderful.

    -_Katie_-

  • *MiXed*Emotion*
    March 18, 2003
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    Wow this is Awesome!! Your friend did a GREAT job w/ this!!


    **hANNAH


  • LittleLeopardess
    March 18, 2003
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    Thanks for sharing this with us all! And happy b-day! Late or early happy b-day!

    Your friend wrote a really good poem! It makes me think of my best friend right now. I really don't know what i'd do if i didnt have her! She's always there for me and when she needs me im here for her!

    "You turned my darkness into light,
    You made everything all right
    You picked me up when I was down
    You turned my life around"

    Those lines were awsome.

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