Gruesome sounds Fill the night air..
Hollow bones slowly crackle, cover n glow- green..
Across the burning field Of an overpowering dream.
As a demon stares out From a death snare within..
Its darkening shadow flows Silently throughout..
Spreading heartache with a malicious-flare.
This demon has been waiting For this flight..
His flight of *S*tained *Re*introduction..
It's a decorative sight.... ~\m/~
Author notes
awww I adore this so far..I might add more..I just don't know :/ lol. It's not a great one..but w/e..It's been a while since I last posted something..so here is that something 
Written June 8th, 2006
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holy shit!!!!!!!!!!! I like never thought I would hear from u again.... What is up?????? Damn yo..thanx 4 the holler N hit ups on my poems..that's freaking awsum Holler back as soon as u can!!
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omg mark i forgot how much i loved your poems, it's been so long... you're still just as talented as the last tikme i read one. GREAT job.
cheers
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Yeah I think Wow's a good word for it
Nice work on this LP, very unique and very chilling. Nice to have ya back xp
Ttyl! *hugs*
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Hey Lams!! What a killer message..I really had a *
*blast* * checkin' it out..I can picture it in a *nuclear waste dump..Thatsa a great description!! Anywayz.. Hope all is well with you.. N we gotta talk on msn again soon 
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Heh..Yeah *wow* does describe it..I thinks, so thanx for saying that. I can't wait to talk to you on msn mssgr. It's gonna be great I promise.. lol. Thanx again!! *hugz* Mark
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I like the use of capitals and puncuation. Poem sounds like it's in a nuclear waste dump (that's a good thing)
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Hey Punk.
I love this. "Spreading heartache with a malicious-flare."
Lets marry
Love, Batman. -
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Aww...it's...WOW! lol I have no words. So...does wow describe it?!?!
I really liked it though it was awesome.
~Andrea
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