Music washes over me,
Muscles moving in time,
Hips winding,
Back arching,
Arms raised,
Eyes closed,
Not caring about the onlookers,
Drink in hand,
Dancing out my anger, hurt, pain, love.
Slowly the beat of my heart,
Pounding, sounds louder,
Louder than the music,
Body under melodies control,
Thoughts, feelings escaping,
Flowing away,
Leaving me free,
Making my world better,
Dancing out my anger, hurt, pain, love.
Energy draining,
Feet moving to the rhythm,
Pushing closer to my partner,
Needing to be lead,
Wanting to lead,
Hips closer,
Feeling his hands pull my back inwards,
Dancing out my anger, hurt, pain, love.
Eyes still closed,
Head falling backwards,
Bodies melting to the music,
Pulsing beat still running through me,
You understand im determined,
Understand my purpose
Let me lean on you as i drain
All emotion, all energy
Having danced out my anger, hurt, and pain.
Author notes
Um, I just wanted to write something that described how i feel when dancing, but im not so sure I like it now.
Written June 8th, 2006
A contest entry
- bring home the poetry. Inspire me by grippineagle.
300 points, ended July 3, 2006, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Well, I think it's very cool. The repetition was very effective.
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Wondeful imagery here. Very nicely done
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I like it.i really do.
It makes me want to dance when i am not feeling too good.
i like the way you described the needs you want to get from dancing.
I enjoyed reading it....
|samantha|
Edited on Jul 01, 10:36 p.m. because ''.
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