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Memories

Memories that matter,
would fade away too,
one day I'll be a new person,
one day you'll be a new you.

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Well...it just came out...from somewhere deep inside.
Written June 8th, 2006

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  • workshop
    June 9, 2006
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    I simply liked it. Pretty powerful four lines.
    Edited on Jun 09, 9:48 because ''.


  • Wolf Mancini
    June 8, 2006
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    Very nice and wise words!