She wished she was outside,
But the sky was crying.
Wishing to escape her prison,
Only staying because it was warm.
Hemmed in by her inability to act,
To stand and demand release,
To break away from the expected.
What is society but a prison.
Leave her cell to walk in the rain.
Choosing a cold and wet freedom,
Staying warm and dry instead.
Author notes
ok, i had to write this for a class, i don't think its my best but hey, its about the math class i had today...
Written June 8th, 2006
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yay I like this one because i can relate to it i would rather be outside in the rain then in math class but i know i must stay in math class.
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yeah, that was today for me, it was pouring all day and i didn't want to wait for the train in the rain so i stayed at school - now i kinda wished i had left and skipped math, we had a test...
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Wow. I really enjoyed this piece. For some reason, I can tell you that I relate to this. Wanting to escape, but stays inside for warmth. idk. I'm just blabing. But very amazing job.
Keep up the awesome work, would ya?
Tori
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