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Traps

I'm running out of days
To fix my stupid ways
But I've got no courage
To sweep away this wreckage

It's hard to run
When you don't know where you're going
The damage is done
The beat is finally sort of slowing

It's kind of weird to know
That it's not all that tough
It's just a new low
But I'll make it through the rough

Life is full of traps
And I'm just stuck in one
Because it won't open
It won't let me be done

If I could say a few things
(Or more, if need be)
Things might be clearer
So finally I can see

Life is better when forgiveness is in it.

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Written June 7th, 2006

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  • tearrsofthemoon
    June 8, 2006
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    oh yea...


  • tearrsofthemoon
    June 8, 2006
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    I really like this poem a lot, meaning full and lots of emotion, it was amazing, I totally know how you feel and I can totally relate a lot! It was awesome Tina, great great job! I am glad you finally got over your writers block becuase I LOVE reading your poetry and I LOVE this poem! It was quite the come back for your year-long block. lol. never give up, I am always here if you need to talk!
    ♥,
    Jocelyn

  • a u r a
    June 8, 2006
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    Tina, your poem has been executed very well- it rhymes and flows with a lot of ease -I have liked the thoughts portrayed here-'If I could say a few things(Or more, if need be)Things might be clearer So finally I can see'- go ahead Tina, say what you want and clear the air ,dont let anything trap you- you have aright to speak and be heard -you have to give yourself that chance -the most captivating line I found was,'Life is better when forgiveness is in it'