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Taken

Take by the sun light
to be put into a grand new day

Take by what was really mine
and been left astray

Taken by what inspired me the most
and left with a fools gold

Taken by the sadness of loss
I'll look till i can find you

Taken by the hope of nothing
I'll hold on to my faith

Taken by surprise of the Ocean
Don't let go of my hand

Taken by strength
why waste such a gift?

Taken by what i thought was true
And all the lies... wish them away

Taken by a dream
to follow and achieve

Taken by their heart
in their hands you give the trust

Taken by the mind
when Love no longer rules

Taken by the suffering
Happiness will over rule, just wait and see....


Author notes

ummmm.... hmmm lol this one well, i just thought it had been awhile since i last had put something in so yeah lol
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Written June 7th, 2006

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  • Forever-Damned
    June 8, 2006
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    Totally agree with boydamaged! This is such a gorgeous poem Charlie! Well done!!

    -Em XoXo


  • boydamaged
    June 7, 2006
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    Aww, thats sweet. Great job. I loved the ending.